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Wednesday, October 25, 2006
substitution 05
The thunderstorm blat the splat of rain on the windshield the outline dripping indistinct after weeks of drought for my swollen areola still streaming milk the moment after you wrench your head away
settle down, boy. I think if men could possibly understand the feeling of letdown, breastfeeding a voracious infant, toddler or child, and that THAT feeling Ariel nailed in this poem? Yes? Then, men would really get us.
4 comments:
awesome. right in line w/ recent fantasies of mine.
settle down, boy. I think if men could possibly understand the feeling of letdown, breastfeeding a voracious infant, toddler or child, and that THAT feeling Ariel nailed in this poem? Yes? Then, men would really get us.
My word!
But also: heh...
(Hey Gilly...how're tricks?)
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