Wednesday, October 25, 2006

substitution 05


The thunderstorm blat
the splat of rain on the windshield
the outline dripping indistinct
after weeks of drought
for my swollen areola still streaming milk
the moment after
you wrench your head away

4 comments:

hardyf said...

awesome. right in line w/ recent fantasies of mine.

Gillian said...

settle down, boy. I think if men could possibly understand the feeling of letdown, breastfeeding a voracious infant, toddler or child, and that THAT feeling Ariel nailed in this poem? Yes? Then, men would really get us.

Ariel Gordon said...

My word!

But also: heh...

Ariel Gordon said...

(Hey Gilly...how're tricks?)